2. The only major feedback I received was to include a question in my hook to see how it sounded. I included a question but it sounded weird to me, especially because I wasn't talking to anyone. I think I liked my old hook better. I also tried to improve my body language and flow but it still wasn't as good as I would've liked it to be.
Wednesday, April 20, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 4
2. The only major feedback I received was to include a question in my hook to see how it sounded. I included a question but it sounded weird to me, especially because I wasn't talking to anyone. I think I liked my old hook better. I also tried to improve my body language and flow but it still wasn't as good as I would've liked it to be.
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Jake, excellent incorporation of a question as a hook, a great way to change your pitch through feedback. You have to consider that you would typically be pitching this to an investor/professional, in that situation the question won't seem so awkward. Even if you prefer your old hook its always good to try new things to see how it fits in. Great work!
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